A Further Edit...

I thought that this would be my final end cut, however, due to some unfathomable reason, the wipe transition has not come out successfully. I have tried to amend this in several ways by editing the transition's properties but this was unsuccessful. I have now decided to use another transition for my final product.

Editing Development From Draft

From my first draft, I have taken on board some of the feedback and will try to incorporate this into my final cut. In order to do this I have re-uploaded the footage to start from scratch again to try to get things right and how I want them. By doing it this was I wont get confused by what I have already done and can do it more precisely than I did with my quickly edited first draft. I will also start to play around with the footage more, adding effects and possibly some transitions in order to enhance the flow and continuity of the video.

Feedback From Rough Draft

- snap to shaving foam face and off again could it be in time to the music? Like the hands - they are really well timed.
- eyes at the end in time with the music
- great footage but would be even better if all the scene changes are more aligned with the music
- good story line and loved the use of lego man with hands tied.

Rough Edit of My Music Video

This is the original, briefly edited cut of my music video. I will look to get some initial feedback and make alterations when doing my final director's cut.

Unfortunately in order to get the video onto the blog i have had to export it at a poorer quality (Web Streaming) to get it compressed enough to go on here. A better quality rough draft will be shown to an audience at a promotion, and feedback will be posted soon.